Today I spent lots of time working on my essay. There are many resources from website I can use as the quotation, but it is not easy to add it into the essay. I tried to add some sentences which have the relationship with the paragraph, but it seemed not appropriate. Also because I didn't do things on the last weekend, I forgot many contents. Therefore, when it seemed not fit, I deleted them all, and went through the whole article. It's really a big work.
As for the references, I fixed it moderately well, so I hope the references can be no mistake this time.