Today we hand in our essay draft. The inspection result is no one passed it by making mistake in the format. Frankly, I didn't pay enough attention to the rules that teacher shared with us online. At the same time, I ignored the citation thing while I was writing. That's the easiest thing we can do. Next time， I will do better like the
radio said teacher give students comment as they think the idea in that essay is worth for a reply. Students should feedback too. To show they care about the things that teacher just said. Everything will be better gradually.